Hidden meanings

Cryptic metaphors...

Seduction...

Temptation....

Peering into my soul...

 

You could read me like a book ...

You knew how to figure me out...

No-one else can....

 

I miss the feeling of being complete

Thinking about your hidden meanings

Trying to find these hidden meanings

Hidden meanings baby girl,

Hidden meanings....

 

What were you really doing?

Who was being toyed with?

 

....Did you truly love me?

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

The question of love leave us wondering and hoping. I thought I knew everything when I was young. Today a old man will tell you. When the love is good. Hold on tight and celebrate every second with your love. A very good ending to the poem. I like poem that end with a question. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Quinn Blackburn]

excellent wordcrafting. dark, lyric, haunting

[sid......]

woah! gr8!

[Short.Nerd]

This is great! Keep up the good work:)

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Good one..!!

[KAREN]

Great start and wonderful ending to a deep emotional write!

[Rose Masen]

"Cryptic metaphors...

Seduction...

Temptation....

Peering into my soul..."

Amazing start. I loved the feel of this piece as a whole. Nice job.

[SpokenWord]

It is that missing feeling of being complete that compels us to seek that more than finding true love. Everyone wants to be in love but no one wants to wait on it and I suffer from this too. I think my last girl friend played me too, but deep inside I have to ask myself did she really play me or did I play myself? No one is innocent and we all are guilty the beauty of life. Another great write.

[guiltyascharged]

Oh, so sad. I was once cheated on/played. I hated it. Then I got over it. I'm sorry, anyways. I like this write, it's good and deep. And honest.

[freelancejouster]

your first stanza is powerful and enticing, i just wish the rest of the poem went along those same lines.