Ripped and teared

I sit...

Alone...

 

Tears of blood stream like water

Shimmering like a twilight moon

Bleak yet mesmerising

 

Can you see your reflection?

You should....

The blood flows for you

And everything you've done

 

I miss you

I miss the days we had

The smiles we shared

The letters still bring bittersweet memories

 

Whatever happened to forever and always baby?

Do you remember the letters?

Do you remember any of the past?

 

I need you now more than ever...

Reviews

[HopelesslyDevoted]

this is so sad, it reminds me of so many painful memories in my own life. you write straight from the heart though, and i respect that. you rock!

[Tarik]

i can see it in my head and that means that you did a pretty good job on this one...

[iamkim]

Oh gosh! The hairs in my back stood up. Lmao! Fantastic! I can picture out the scene.

I was there, standing... looking at my reflection in your blood that slowly drains. The blood of longing and misery.

Excellent!

[M.Babu]

The second last stanza i liked. The monologue is real sarcastic and you have some fun with it as usual:)