Reflection

Look at this....

Watch it gleam....

Was this what you said when you ripped my heart out?

Was it shiny baby girl?

I know you like shiny things

Such simplicity

Did you see your reflection in my blood 

My crimson mirror

Flowing

To your feet

I miss you 

Even though 

You were 

A b***h

Reviews

[freelancejouster]

well, if simplicity was what you were aiming for, i suppose you've acheived it. theres a point where everything you write has the same lilt, the same awkward bumpy lack of punctuation and the same topic, mostly. i suggest you write an epic if they're all the same.

[Dr. S. D. Blankenship D..]

Reflection -- has stunning appear of sorrow and remorse. The images were fantastic. The words were captivating. --Nice job, Sherbz--

~S. D. Blankenship

[Rafif]

I love how you assured the reader that SHE literally ripped out your heart, the blood and her reflection gave out evidence.
Good write!

[Katub]

Nearly made me cry, your far to good at this little white boy! I wish I could write like you!

[SilentDreamer]

Very brutally honest. Interesting idea though. Nice job

[HopelesslyDevoted]

interesting, a very honest and relatable story...

[M.Babu]

I liked certains parts of this poem. My favourite line has already been quoted and it shows your suppressed creative flair. Good poem-keep writing.

[Short.Nerd]

Haha love the last linee!!! Amazing job :) This was a great poem!

[♥Chloe-The-Zombi..]

THIS IS SO F*CKING BRILLIANT!!!!!! my favorite part was:
"Did you see your reflection in my blood
My crimson mirror
Flowing
To your feet"
such an incredible poem. i can relate to it. 100/100