MIND

Silent dreams

Dare to look in to my eyes.

Open my heart and hear my cries.

Search my soul and feel it prowl as it hunts the darkness from the covers of silence.

Taste the pleasure without desire.

Feal the pulse before the pain.

Hear the whisper of chaos.

Prepare the thought for the onslaught.

Judge not the man but his mind if you can sense his kind.

Still blind to the fury of my story.

Reviews

[Riddhi]

Oh!! It was such a beautiful poem....And words you used were amazing...Very well - crafted lines with beautiful words...
Keep on writing and thanks for sharing...
Riddhi
And happy new year

[Sheraz]

Hey Riddhi, thank you for your comments. And a happy new year to you.

[Elizabeth Mars]

Great word choices!
Beautifully written lines as well!
Very poetic but also quite lyrical :)

Can't wait to see more

[Sheraz]

Thank you, your comments are heart felt. It will be a pleasure to show more. :)

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Each line is like deep cut by blade razor into my mind. Very dark and impressive . Nice bleak creation.

[Sheraz]

You are too kind. But we all know you are the star. I’m a fan. :)

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Ha ha ha thanks dear poet. But i think here are stars like top reviewed writers etc. I really like your poem.

[Sheraz]

ONCe in a while you find hidden 💎 that get unnoticed. It’s how words resonate with different people right. So just because your not at the top review doesn’t mean you don’t shine when you write. THAnk you for your lovely comment.

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Yes I am sure here is so many shining writing what is not unnoticed. There is so many poets are writers what was noticed post mortal . Thanks to seeing my shine.