Dusk

Dusk

A Poem by BlueEyes

The day ends once more
with a silent sigh it waits
to rise once again

© 2011 BlueEyes


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Great poem! It's amazing how it's so short yet it has so much meaning !

Posted 13 Years Ago
You capture that sense of night's pause... that moment when light slips away, but hope rises in the new dawn. Profound glimpse.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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BlueEyes
BlueEyes

Santa Barbara, CA



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