Rain

Rain

A Poem by BlueEyes
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I like the sound of the word "tepid."

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Tepid rain falls

and the desert comes alive

colors beneath

arise thirsty

blooming upon the sand

The desert witch

with her bells

dance a spell

dance a story

dance for the creation

springing forth from the cracks

as the tepid rain falls

and the desert comes alive

© 2011 BlueEyes


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BlueEyes
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I love how you conveyed the desert coming to life as it drank in the rain, soaking in every drop, all the desert animal popped into the scene you painted for me and they were enjoying the rain, soaking in the refreshment, grateful for the tepid rain.
Beautiful.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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simply amazing, i enjoyed this

Posted 13 Years Ago


This poem is so beautifully written. Well done! :)

~Lizzy~

Posted 13 Years Ago


Ohh i really like this its so good :D

Posted 13 Years Ago


:) Loved this piece. It was really well writen :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


I agree, 'tepid' is a great word :) I believe in these kinds of poems, beauitful and paint a picture in my head as i read line after line :P
Beth :3

Posted 13 Years Ago


i loved it =-]

Posted 13 Years Ago


Excellent vivid poem, much enjoyed :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


I love the description you have in this.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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BlueEyes
BlueEyes

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