No one can take it away

Just a strong woman poem lol

You are that girl who makes his head turn
You are the point at which the fire burns
You are the strength that claims the last bit
You are the the wonder the girl who has it
when people see you they see those strong eyes
they see the power in your womanly stride
Don't get caught up, you don't need him
listen to Your father and never give in
We are the fighters we beat back the cruel
We are the woman that break that mans rule

Reviews

[I Am Svetlana]

So uplifting and inspirational! We shouldn't let people push us around or mistreat us simply because we are of a different sex than them. We are all human just the same. We should all learn to be independent and not depend on others. Breaking the rules and making our own. Rising up when everyone expected us to fall. Loved this!

[Shema]

Thank you! I love your view on the feminine strength that is exactly what I was trying to portray your comment warms my heart because it tells me you respect yourself and all of us woman should. Thats what I have been learning! I really like your writing style!

[I Am Svetlana]

Haha, thanks and I like your writing style also! Kudos. But yeah, it is good to be strong mentally because without that, we would truly be nothing. We would be walked all over, passed without a moments glance.

[Sami Khalil]

A very inspirational poem for women to empower them and make them achieve higher goals...Bravo

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Ohhhhh my I am in the wrong place lol! I loved it and don't care if I am a man or not:)

[Shema]

Thank you hun, I didn't mean to singe out the men lol

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No its was perfectly fine it fit the poem :) Your very welcome dear friend:) You sure ya ant from Tennessee we say hun a lot lol:)

[Shema]

Lol Tenesse no a little bit of time in Nv

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I was just pickin at ya lol.

[Shema]

You are to it!