Lies

 

will watch those lies slid off your  tongue like turpentine but don't think you're getting away with them

I might just be remembering them and waiting for the day to drop the bomb

 

Author's Note

Just something small

Reviews

[cest la vie]

Small but mighty!!!

Little woman carry a big stick in the words. Nicely done!!

[Jonathan Ballam]

Small, succinct, pungent and I can almost taste the bitterness. I admire people who have the courage to throw in small titbits. Why should we feel duty-bound to rattle off a page of drivel? hehehe...

I enjoyed this write and would like to pop it on my blog if that's alright with you?

(I would quote you, of course)

Take Care :D

[sudeshna]

small but still expressive....i was smiling when i was reading.. but yes its my favourite... great going

[Alicia™]

Pretty good, but I think you should get rid of one of the 'them', since you repeated the word twice...

[Sarah]

the slides off your tongue part reminds me of that song white liar by miranda lambert lol. its short but good lol

[Vincent]

isn't it funny how the short ones are always the most emotionally filled?
compelling.

[Lilly]

very nice - powerful.

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

It IS true. A woman's memory is like a trap. Seems like she has a free pass...and that day
when she breaks the rules...she will have justification. She shall smite him twice.

[Manda]

oh i like it. only a few sentences can make a poem like this strong. very well done =) good job

[Jenny Nelson]

No doubt our untruths can and often do come back around to bite us in the fanny. Certainly conveyed the feel of a "woman scorned."