Two Faced

About Two Face people

 

 

Two face twats
everybody knows
but nobody says a word
Shhh
don't stare, their walking towards us
what are they going to say to us?
what are they going to say to others?
Liars. Fakes. Posers.
Ugly two faced twats.

Words twisted in tales of lies and gossip
only for their evil pleasure
to torment others
befriend somebody

Learn their scars
Learn their family
Learn about the things they love and hate
twist the words into fairy tales
to pleasure the two faced twats

To the victim's that were tormented by these evil creatures
Don't worry
Ignore it
The two faced twats shall
come to there downfall very very soon
Have you heard about the one that has a disease?
Is it really just a simple irritation on the skin
or a STD?
Yes yes smile now. I told you their down falls shall come soon...

 

Reviews

[Bree]

I do love this.

The general idea of what you've got here is great - and I've felt that way about a LOT of people. I went to school with many a "two-faced twats"... so reading this had me flashback to that. It really made me remember why I was so ridiculously glad to graduate. =)

-Bree

[hajo]

Think about breaking up some of the lines. Repetition of lines in some cases will make them more powerful. Less is more, when it comes to poetry.

Shhh.
Don't stare they are(no contraction) walking toward us
What are they going to say
What are they going to say
Liars. Fakes. Posers.
Ugly two-faced twats.
(and maybe)
Learn their scars
Learn their family
learn about the things
they love
and hate
twist the words
into fairy tales.

[I'llPlayTheJuliet]

haha, Sorry is my laughing offends you, but I could help but to laugh at "or an STD?"
Great poem though,
I remember by days of being "friends" with a two faced b***h. {sorry just remembering the stupid things she did makes me angry}
WEll I loved it, thank you thank you for sharing

[Tim H]

Good description of the drama as well as a good condemnation of gossip in general. seems as though karma will catch up to those that torment others.

[Georgia Gypsy]

High school drama? you hit the nail on the head...well done. (they get over themselves eventually, i know some who were like this and now they are fat and unhappy! serves them right:)you did a great job !