Two Faced

About Two Face people

 

 

Two face twats
everybody knows
but nobody says a word
Shhh
don't stare, their walking towards us
what are they going to say to us?
what are they going to say to others?
Liars. Fakes. Posers.
Ugly two faced twats.

Words twisted in tales of lies and gossip
only for their evil pleasure
to torment others
befriend somebody

Learn their scars
Learn their family
Learn about the things they love and hate
twist the words into fairy tales
to pleasure the two faced twats

To the victim's that were tormented by these evil creatures
Don't worry
Ignore it
The two faced twats shall
come to there downfall very very soon
Have you heard about the one that has a disease?
Is it really just a simple irritation on the skin
or a STD?
Yes yes smile now. I told you their down falls shall come soon...

 

Reviews

[Lizanne]

Ah, the sweetness of revenge. There are always two faced people in every group. And when it finally comes back on them it is hilarious. You vented and solved the problem, all in one writing. Great work of a talented pen. Loved it!

[Beatrice Mars]

Wow, Like the repition and emotion, good write. Thanks for the add!

[Tate Morgan]

LOL; wELL NO ONE CAN SAY YOU HELD BACK ON THE EMOTION I LIKE IT
TATE

[*Evelen*]

This poem made me laugh, and smile. It's awesome. teh heh. I think everyone sadly has met those kind of people, but most of them (or at least the smart ones) stop believing them, and ignores what they say. Well done! Thumbs up to you!

[Fabian G. Franklin]

I laughed when I read this. Thanks, I needed cheering up! The next to the last line was BRUTAL! But probably well deserved! lol Excellent write.

[Markymark]

The facade of young girls. Your piece resonates well with anyone who has ever fallen victim to cruel and vicious people. Admittedly 'twats' is a tad strong, and yet when one is himself/herself a victim of intentional deception we tend to grab the nearest fitting slur and fling it, which gives this piece some flavor and color. I haven't been around in a while, but am coming back around since my workload is lightening. This versing:

Words twisted in tales of lies and gossip
only for their evil pleasure
to torment others
befriend somebody

Learn their scars
Learn their family
Learn about the things they love and hate
twist the words into fairy tales
to pleasure the two faced twats

This speaks of malicious gossip. Willful hurting and betrayal. I liked the venom of your retort and understand your rant.

Great work Shelby Cobra--

Can't wait to read another.

Later, Mark.

[Naomi Montana Walsh]

I know just the kind you are talking about... too bad those kind are everywhere..but what does their opinon mean anyhow..

[Victoria Harlequin]

:] That was quite a read. As the person below me, I like the raw feeling of this poem. These are very true words! I love the usage of the word 'twat', haha. Great write!

[Bennett Logan]

I love the venomous and caustic language! The totally raw and unfiltered nature of this poem actually makes it read (to me, anyway) like the narrator is raging and screaming. Really good stuff. I remember from high school how the girls would constantly, and for no seemingly good reason, dish terrible s**t out on each other. It was dizzying. You capture the effects quite well, I think.

I'm normally all about revising and rewriting, but this is just fine as it is. Touchy, sensitive, and angry subjects make great poetry. :)

Just a couple nit-picky things...
line 5: change "their" to "they're."
line 19: change "victim's" to "victims."

Have a good one and keep up the good work!

[Stacey Watts]

Very well written piece. I like the attitude you wrote this with. Ahh the life those people will always exsist even when you are my age. Great job.