Forever And Always

Forever And Always

A Poem by Shelby Baker

I look into your eyes and smile
oh yeah we sure do fight a lot
but there's no denying our love for each other

so strong
So bold

it's incredible it's amazing and oh so unbelievable.
We been through good times and bad times
we have broken up so many times but always found a way back to each other
we can't stay away from each other.
Miles away but oh so close to each other
We are still learning about each others dislikes and likes and
oh do we ever set each other off but there is nothing that has kept us away.
Right now it's raining baby and I'd love for you to be
here kissing and touching me in the rain but then again
I Always wish you were with me no matter the weather
Peeps I'm around with
The places I'm at
I want you with me everyday to hold my hand and just be here.
I love you baby
Forever and always…

© 2010 Shelby Baker


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A beautiful poem. Love is all we got in the end. Your desire and love can be felt in the words in your poem. I like the phrase Forever and always.
Coyote

Posted 15 Years Ago


Great piece. I loved the flow of this and I also loved the way you show how difficult long distance love is.
Very well done.

Posted 15 Years Ago


I love your innocense. Oh, to BE young again!!!!!!!

Posted 15 Years Ago


This was a wonderful poem. Its very heart warming and wonderful. I never really had a relationship so i cant relate to it much but i can imagine myself feeling like that. Wonderful write. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really liked it. It's very powerful, and beautifully complimented with a natural feel. A BIG relief from all the divorce and breakup and whatnot I've been hearing, as well as these people being proud of themselves. Very nice.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

That's true love! you go thru the good times and the bad, but you do it together, always finding your way back to each other. I think that's great! Great writing!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i enjoyed this poem, not really my thing u know :)
but i enjoyed, its a nice break from all the sad poems ive been reading about abuse and stuff

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ahh, young love. Beautiful yet tragic. Enjoyed.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is good, really sweet and simple. greATTT!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This emulates a nostalgic love letter, in days when men would hand write with feathered pen and ink upon heart's contingency the satisfactory smile that comes with serene, progressive love.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Shelby Baker
Shelby Baker

Ware, MA



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