Don't Let Go Baby

This is about not giving up love.

[[we love each other]]

Mistakes of the past hurts both of us
After math of the hurt haunts us both
Today is the day we talk about it
Tomorrow is when we find out if we will regret the choices made

[[let's fix this baby]]

I hate the fighting
lets stop it right now

[[you mean the world to me]]

Later Is the time we go
Over everything that has happened
Venting on each other won't do good
Either we fix the bumps in the road or let go

[[let's smooth the bumps]]

Your the one that makes the choice
Our love and future is in your hands
Ur the only one..

[[[don't let us go baby]]]

 

Reviews

[RastaChiko™]

It's hard to feel it the first time, but after you read it again, all of it hits yout like a train. This is a really emotion piece and I'm trying to really understand the mood. Great write.

[sudeshna]

WOW!! BEAUTIFUL THATS WHAT I CAN SAY...

[TAY]

i didnt get it the first time through but i read it again an den saw da message ha i like this one its very entertaining great work

[AmeliaElizabeth]

This is sweet :) And the format is pretty cool!

[Andrew'sWonderland]

Beautiful!! I love the format which was very creative!!! Great Write!!

[ShaneBerry]

i like the format you did this in and its very unique, i love it! keep it up lol

[Padma]

A nice poem."Either we fix the bumps in the road or let go"....I liked this line a lot.

[Tony]

I like this alot for many reasons, your committment and willingness to make this work, you have a fighting emotion in how you speak and the format of the somewhat acrostic form is clever. Matt is a lucky guy to have someone so determined on making a love relationship work. Nice job Shelby.

Tony

[Daniel]

I liked this, I could feel the emotion.

Nice read. :)

[jessie]

Very sweet! So much emotion and very deep. Thanks for sharing.