Fetish

Touching me in forbidden bravado,

Nailing me to him,

Hand by hand,

Tongue by tongue,

Foot by foot,

I sit in the thrown,

He speaks in fire,

Drip perfume,

Wax heart beats,

Smoke kisses,

Please, memorize me,

In a ball room masquerade,

Drinking butterflies,

Feasting on bolts,

This is war.

Reviews

[David Michael]

Such an amazing combination of imagery and feelings! At one point it feels like pain, fighting, a struggle, and at another time complete sensual, intoxicating lust! I felt flushed after reading this, it was so quick in apprehending, so hot in passion, so shocking in effect. "He speaks in fire, / Drip perfume, / Wax heart beats, / Smoke kisses, / Please, memorize me". Provocative wording, that...

[Bystander]

Your collection of words reflects you and only you. This makes for great reading. Bravo.

[Alex Vandool]

I love it

[johnnyqueer]

This is so odd, yet gorgeous. I enjoyed reading this :)

[STAR CHILD]

wow this is wonderful i like it big sis

[John Jackson (El Juero)]

I feel like I've been clobbered! This is, well point blank. I love it!
I feel the piece more than understand it, if that makes any sense.

Excellent writng

[kdpgrahi]

Lovely. Very simple and easy to understand and bears a deep meaning, only a poet can imagine. Well done and I expect more of such writings.