Dear...dad...

 am as a shadow in your life
a thing to yell at
to complete your ranom tasks
i do not mind it is normal
for father to have chores for the daughter
but i just wish that it wasnt
the only time we spoke
and yelling doesnt count
i know when i was younger
the tickle game was fun
but now to be honest i hate to be touched
so please just tallk to me
ask me how i am
ask me what i like and about my friends
i know im not popular or very well liked in school
but can you show some care for me at home
i know your very busy
mabey to busy for me
but if just once in a while
you sat me down to speak
i remeber when you hugged me
and told me you loved me
i was happy
but that is not enough
mabey i just expect to much
but i wish you were there for me
i want to be happy to call you my daddy
 

Reviews

[Anya]

oh gosh.... that's so sad... wonderfully written though :)

[C. Porter]

this is good..i like it. it's interesting.