Take me, Thrill me, Kiss me, Kill me

I watch you from a far
Wishing we weren't so far apart
I don't know why your here
Or why I am shedding tears
I don't know why you are who you are
but your slowly breaking my heart
I just want to hide
No, take me and let me be by your side
I want you to kiss me
I want you to see
That I can be
Just what you need
Take me away
There are so many things i want to say
Thrill me
show me how wonderful love can be
Kiss me and make me laugh
because that is all I have
Kill me with your powerful love
and let me fall out of the sky and fly like a dove
Take me, take me away
Words no longer have meaning so there is nothing to say
Thrill me, thrill me till i cannot speak
I cant move i am too weak
Kiss me, kiss me until i cant breathe
You are all i want to see
Kill me, kill me because without you
I have nothing to gain or lose

Reviews

[Anata]

apart from a couple of spelling mistakes i find this poem very intriguing.
To me it sounds like an early love, maybe even a flash of lust with no strings attached.
I like it :)