Deliver Me

Please deliver me

Out of the pits of hell

So that

I can live to tell

Please don't let this

Fury unleash

And bring down

The wrath of evil on me

Please deliever me

Out of this madness

For my living is invain

Bound and tied by sadness

Save my soul

It's time

Time for me to let go

Out of the darkness

Into the light

I pray to God

With all my might

Place me above

The darkness within

Wash me clean

And cleanse my sin

I surrender my all to you

I ask for your guidance

To understand

As I plead

For a helping hand

Set me beyond bounds

I ask you please

Deliver me

Reviews

[Ahmad Cox]

Wow so beautiful and profound. I respect your affirmation of our saviors saving grace through this poem.

[Sheila Marie Carr]

Thanks it was the only way I survived

[Ahmad Cox]

Nice. I can sense that strength and will that comes from hitting rock bottom and finding your way through God again. I know I had to go through the same process when I was about 21 or so but now I can honestly say I know God is running all things for my good and I have been healing and spreading his light to others as well.

[Sheila Marie Carr]

Wonderful keep up the good work

[Orlando Murcia]

I am still waiting for my being to be
completely set free

I haven't surrendered all but I hope
one day evrything that I carry will be cast out
and rebuked with no return at all

Great write

Orlando m

[deeps]

This is amazing and very well expressed.
Emotional write this is, Your write just flows.

[Jen Marks]

This was an amazing write. Wow, again!
This one also brought tears to my eyes.
I can sense that your heart was really put into this.
I'll be waiting for your next poem.

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♥Jen Marks