WOW Sheila this was intense.. To be treated so is disgraceful. The emotions inside were so vivid. I felt each stabbing pain and felt like I was you.. Looking outside the window.. If truth, then I say to heck with him, hope he got what he deserved, if fiction, then one heck of a job!
This is full of emotion and vengeful pain, and I'm sure a lot of women can easily relate to this. It's crafted flawlessly and each line flows perfectly into the next, with just as much passion and agression. Very well done.
Sheila, there's not much I can say that has not already been said except maybe that you are a true testament of survival and those in your life are very fortunate to have you there. Every poem you write seems to spill with extreme emotion the very moment it hits the paper!
The very essence of your soul is to give, it's obvious with the passion that you have as you express your inner most feelings! Always remember that your worth is not measured by ANY man, let me repeat, ANY man!! The man that treats you like the queen you are will build you up and keep you on the pedestal that every beautiful, loving, caring woman deserves! Stay strong and God Bless!!
Wow, this really gave me chills.
Hopefully this is not a true experience for you.
This showed a lot of emotion, and must have been hard to write.
Very, very, VERY well done!! :)
This is a very emotional poem and i can see that it is taken from real life as there is so much feeling in it,my heart goes out to you if this is the truth of an awful betrayal and lust for another woman,deceit is terrible and it gets worse as the offender just keeps spinning his or her lies like some black widowed spider,digging a bigger hole for him or her to eventually fall in to when the penny drops.
You have written a wonderful flowing poem which deserves respect and admiration for the guts you have shown in wearing your huge heart on your sleeve,some people are just so unlucky in love and deserve much better perhaps the choices we make in life owe much to the downfall in our relationships ,well done.
My name is Sheila Carr, I am 51 years old
My passion is writing, reading, drawing and listening to music
My motto is "I'm a survivor"
My dreams are to become a published writer, and to leave my leg.. more..