December

December cold night…
December full of light…
I’m standing outside, all alone, in the dark
Just imagining those stars that I would rewrite…

I would have chosen the most perfect moment
For me to cross your path…
I would have fought against all odds to make your world a better place
I would have dusted down your every worry, your every fear
I would have welcomed you to my celestial sphere and together we would disappear
Somewhere, over the greatest constellation, where I could be your eternal Venus,
also your favorite cosmic station

I’m freezing, all I do is mumbling your name
it lights up my soul with its crimson, blazing flame
Babe, I’m falling….
Can you feel me?! Where are you?
In which space time you will find me again?
But babe we’re just the wrong time travelers…
that couldn’t make it to an end…

Reviews

[Chris]

Evenin dreams held in solitude...
candlelight whispers held closer than skin,
the touches we feel so soft and warm
and the tears that are left within.

Smiles from a snow bank...

[CyranoDBergeron]

Men are from Mars, remember.

Lol but Damn. I hope someone is saying the same thing about me somewhere!

[Onlyme]

If, buts and if only, ships that pass in the night. Delightfully sweet and heartfelt words of longing and regret. I love the humour held within too.

[Sheila's Habitat]

Thank you very much, I appreciate it, the time you took to read my poem and also your review! Thank you @Dawn

[Onlyme]

your very welcome. :)

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Ships that pass in different dimensions in the cosmos - great imaginative and creative write - loved the wordplay and energy in the piece - bravo ... :-)

[Sheila's Habitat]

@Phill Oz O'fee let me thank you:-) I appreciate your positive feedback and the time you took to read my lines.