Flammable heart

A Poem by rhymeaway

Our fireplace was damp and cold,

3 years of separation would be it.

Oh the number of firemen to put out just one dangerous fire!

I could say I was treated for 4th degree burns.

Yesterday we met after long and you still spoke with your notorious smile,

And I knew I'd burnt down as a whole then and there.

© 2016 rhymeaway

Author's Note

My first poem in free verse. Please give me feedback. Thank you!

My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register

Reviews

Coyote Poetry

Burning down the house. Next time leave the fireplace alone. I enjoyed this tale, led to logical ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago

annalysiar

Great honest and raw. Awesome write

Posted 8 Years Ago

8 Years Ago

Thank you!!

Mara

its great! really like it :)
thank you for sharing!

Posted 8 Years Ago

8 Years Ago

Thank you for reading!

David Scott

I love free verse. Keep writing. It will open up more and more as you explore.
I could see smile and feel the burn.

Posted 8 Years Ago

8 Years Ago

Thank you for reading!

Southern_Writes

Its beautiful and so free, that it really leaves a lot in the creative and story area. I liked it. It tells a stroy of a reignited love that once had blazed.

Posted 8 Years Ago

8 Years Ago

Thank you for reading!

Bear

Disarmed, drained and defeated all by a simple smile that numerous firemen could only fan the flames :~)
Don't read more into that because of the smile ha, ha, I think you did a very nice job, I give it for out of five Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap!