Hunting for love

It rained heavily

enough to merge with her tears

earlier a shower of love

now it seemed oh so fierce!

Headlights would flash

and the horns would blare

broken she was

but nobody really seemed to care.

The smooth on the eyes charmer

who she was with night and day

had found another muse

and gracefully walked away

But in no time she was back

exploring the mesmerizing magic of love

only months ago,a lone wolf

she had yet again managed to find her dove

Author's Note

Thank you for reading! Do let me know what you think :)

Reviews

[Gee]

NEXT...as the door slams on the butt of a love lost the next is walking the path to her door.Nicely done........I'm a rhyming type myself

[rhymeaway]

oh thank you!

[Philip Muls]

Some people just cannot be alone. They hunt for a replacement love. You capture that well here.

[rhymeaway]

Thank you for reading! :)

[wordman]

a woman seeking love,like a panther searching for prey,very mysterious

[rhymeaway]

Ahh yes! That's true. :)

[Southern_Writes]

Of what you have, this is my favorite. Would you find it strange if I say I feel you aren't giving everything> With each piece of yours Ive read, I feel you've left a piece of you out. I can't feel the whole of your heart.

[rhymeaway]

Not at all strange! This is why we're all here. To improve. Thank you so much! Hope I do better in my next :)

[Coyote Poetry]

A nice ending to the poem.
"But in no time she was back
exploring the mesmerizing magic of love
only months ago,a lone wolf
she had yet again managed to find her dove "
I like the journey expressed leading to good ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[rhymeaway]

Thank you so much! It means a lot :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Bohrium Guy]

I think this is an awesome display of emotion and well written. Awesome Job!

~Rob~

[rhymeaway]

Thanks Rob! :)