Warmth

I am a very friendly person but to get to know me completely,you have to get through a wall I have built to keep myself protected.

Walking down the endless road,

I could tell I wasn't cold,

I attributed it to the warmth of love,

but I still didn't take off my jacket or glove.

Author's Note

Thank you for reading. Please share your opinion. It only helps me get better :)

Reviews

[nocool]

great write.. short and sweet

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the poem. You said a handful in so few words. Love can warm-up the spirit. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[rhymeaway]

Thank you for reading! :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.

[MohamedBencharef]

good work , you opened my mind and just keep writing

[rhymeaway]

Thank you!

[Bobbo600]

I wonder at the endless road, perhaps the journey of life? could cold then be the bitter parts of life? therefore the take away is believe that there is good but keep your defenses up. Nice job

Edit: I really need to get in the habit of reading other peoples comments and your wonderful responses to them before I go posting a review. I liked your view on it, keep up the good writing!

[rhymeaway]

Hahaha thank you! I don't mind at all. Just hope I got the message across. Thank you for reading! :)

[youngkingkwan]

Simple, yet meaningful. I could see a continuation in the midst.

[rhymeaway]

Thank you! :)

[Lydia Shutter]

Love can warm a person, but obviously you have been burned by love in the past...hence keeping on the jacket and glove. Good rhyming. Lydi**

[rhymeaway]

Thank you so much!

[Bear]

Life being the endless road, the climate a state of emotion, interesting concept and a great analogy of the human condition. Just because you are loved is no reason to leave yourself unprotected, aka the reason you didn't take off your jacket or gloves. Very witty and smartly written, I want to thank Poison for sending me the read request for this poem it was a pleasure to read. Standing Ovation! Clap! Clap!

[rhymeaway]

Thank you so much! Your words are highly encouraging! :)

[KarMarBar]

I loved the way you used the love in your heart to symbolically keep you warm. My only critique would be the first line, "Walking down the endless road." I was just left curious as to why the road had no end? Or did you mean that as a metaphor for endless love? However, overall, I really enjoyed your poem and I thought you got your point across very well for the poem being simplistically stated. Good work.

[rhymeaway]

Thank you for reading! My interpretation of "Walking down the endless road" is life goes on and we find love at different stages but sometimes we just can't fully give back what is being offered to us. I'm glad you liked it :)

[wordman]

made you feel secure,great job

[rhymeaway]

Thank you so much!

[wordman]

my pleasure,welcome to w/c

[rhymeaway]

It's great being here :)

[wordman]

best site I have found,starlite café is probably as good

[annalysiar]

Beautiful short and true. Great write

[rhymeaway]

Thank you for reading!