Synopsis

Synopsis

A Chapter by L.G. Knight
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The plot is known...

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Rodreika Myers has everything she ever wanted, A handsome caring Fiancé, her own practice as a medical  doctor, and Several close friends to share her happiness. The only problem is the one thing she has and doesn't want. A husband. This little overlooked detail is keeping her from planning her wedding or even setting a definitive date for said wedding. She takes out an add in the papers and starts proceedings for her divorce only to receive a one word answer in a note.  Now she must travel thousands of miles from her Colorado Springs home to Divorce a man she married in a whirl wind eight years ago.

David Rolle is determined not to give Rodreika her divorce from their marriage that, in his opinion, she never gave a chance. Determined to fight Rodreika every step of the way he doggedly blocks her every attempt at a divorce. He made a promise when he said those vows and he is determined to keep them. What he doesn't expect is to once again feel all those old feelings that made him marry her to begin with. Can David Win her heart all over again and show he that love has no distance? Or will he once again have his heart taken thousands of miles when she goes back to her life and another man?



© 2008 L.G. Knight


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Hmmm..this story reminds me of the movie Sweet Home Alabama, but it sounds like a cute story. : ]

-Nicole

Posted 16 Years Ago


This looks interesting. I'm not a big fan of romance, though, so to hold my interest the characters and setting, as well as the peripherals of the storyline, have to be Danielle Steel good.
Your sentences seem fairly good, but there are some grammar points I would fix:
Be careful about capitalizing when it is not a title of a place or work, or a proper name, or the beginning of a sentence. The first sentence has a couple of errors of this type.
Also, I would use a colon in place of the first comma. I would also use one to connect "A husband," to the sentence before it. It is really only one idea, one sentence. Also there is a typo and her became he in the second to last line of your synopsis.
I'll have to test a chapter tomorrow. Keep writing on this! It looks as though it may prove to be an enticing story. (I don't review anything unless it peaks my interest. You've certainly done so, though I'm no fan of romance.)
C


Posted 16 Years Ago



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L.G. Knight
L.G. Knight

Houston, TX



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