Ramblings of a depressed mind

just some ramblings

I'm tired of life,

Tired of caring,

Tired of the strife,

That comes with each day.

Tired of collectors,

Pretending to be caring,

As they demand that you pay.

 

Tired of waking up,

Tired of going to work,

Tired of trying,

To ignore the hurt.

 

Tired of robbing Peter,

So I can pay Paul.

Tired of letting,

Voicemail field calls.

 

Tired of avoidance,

Life’s tap dance,

And constantly asking,

For a second chance.

 

The Lord never gives us,

More than we can take?

That's BS because,

I'm about to break.

 

Tired of dreams,

Predicting my death,

Being the dreams,

I like the best.

 

Tired of wishing,

It would all end,

Then waking up to find,

It's started over again.

 

Tired of being so desperate,

For an escape,

I'll even take one,

That's completely fake.

 

Tired of friends,

That aren't really,

And only come 'round,

When they need something.

 

Tired of hearing,

"Should have thought of that before".

Tired of being tired,

Need I say more?

 

Author's Note

ok, I wasn't going to accept ratings because it was just something I needed off my chest but I realized that sometimes the things we just HAVE to write or we will implode are the things that get best ratings so here it goes... rate away...

Reviews

[Adam Jordan Turner]

This is really good, I like this one, it gets really strong in the middle, great climax! I loved how you ended it with a question! It changes it from being just bitchy and a rant to a challenge. You deserve to voice your mind and you dare anyone to say anything about it. This one is wonderful, love the way you incorporated all the small things that happens in a day that piss us off but we overlook; such as "Tired of collectors, pretending to be caring, as they demand that you pay". Very honest, and very brave, it probably helped you out a lot too to get it off of your chest! Very well done! I would definitely give it a rating of 100% for honesty alone. I think you should open it up! Great write girl!