Beautiful artwork and amazing words my friend. I could feel the struggle and falling in your words. Does the world kill what we were and make us, to her desire? I wonder. Thank you my friend for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote
Posted 4 Years Ago
4 Years Ago
Maybe we see and hear the world as these women see and hear it. The struggle in this addiction and .. read moreMaybe we see and hear the world as these women see and hear it. The struggle in this addiction and she is a real b***h. Thank you for you comments.
I don't normally favor rhyming. But, this, right here, yeah. It's wondrously subtle. I try to do that, too. It's actually, more like meter. You use it to propel the next line, without defining it.
"Pounding a one beat drum".
They all are, darling. Each one.
Posted 6 Years Ago
6 Years Ago
This has a specific meaning to me that no one else can see. Do you see? I sometimes hear it in my h.. read moreThis has a specific meaning to me that no one else can see. Do you see? I sometimes hear it in my head and then add the words it moves in a pattern like numbers. "begins to breath .... becomes the wind" I enjoy your reviews I thank you
Wonderful write as the emotions soar expressing the internal nightmare of the soul. Loved the write.
Posted 6 Years Ago
6 Years Ago
Weeping Willow, we are haunted in many ways through out life. It is empowering to write about. .. read moreWeeping Willow, we are haunted in many ways through out life. It is empowering to write about.
Thank you for the great review.
Great job portraying the thoughts of an addict. In the words of MetallicA, "Master of puppets, I'm pulling your strings, twisting your mind and smashing your dreams."
Posted 6 Years Ago
6 Years Ago
CaffeinatedMe, I am thrilled you enjoyed this and give such an amazing review. Nothin but Love. read moreCaffeinatedMe, I am thrilled you enjoyed this and give such an amazing review. Nothin but Love.
Sounds like a deep sleep nightmare, I love it. There is a deep sinking feeling that is portrayed well by both imagery and poem, and for me personally it speaks to a secret fear of the innermost part of myself, that scary something beneath the subconscious. This is brilliant stuff. Keep it up.
Posted 6 Years Ago
6 Years Ago
We are our own worst enemy at times, the only hope is to understand the limitations and traps we set.. read moreWe are our own worst enemy at times, the only hope is to understand the limitations and traps we set ourselves. Thank you for the outstanding review.
my, oh my. such powerful imagery. each line a gem, stronger than the last. felt myself floating in a dream state of another realm and consciousness. we all have our demons and ridding ourselves of them is liberating. you continue to break the mold my dear friend. your thoughts and words take me places i never thought possible ... :)
Posted 6 Years Ago
6 Years Ago
Pete, demons are all in the past but I have no problem rounding them up for a write. Thank you for a.. read morePete, demons are all in the past but I have no problem rounding them up for a write. Thank you for another great review. You rock!!
When I was a young girl I was your average Tomboy. I lived to watch Star Trek the only thing that could take me away from the voyages of the Star Ship Enterprise was playing Baseball with the boys. .. more..