HAMMER on METAL

" thunder is envious of lightnings perfect hit hammer on metal as the gods crack their whip "

                     

man kneels in honor

dubbed hammer for the god's of war

creating his place in a hum and rattle

tracks time to a worthy rival

renders a flash in the sky

we fall and fly

lost inside our own battle cry

hammer on metal produces this metallic sound

agony’s pleasure just beyond

again and over the echo responds

calling us home while blinding us profound

a cue recurs

passes over our ears

a crown for a target

the single shot

a blind round

quicker than quick we are enamored

one finger on the trigger

chosen for one

all ages can be a player

the rules have come undone

to beat a new order

the next train

jumps the tracks

a chain snaps back

releases a bullet named terror

this bedlam competes

within the sound of conflict

lives just past bliss's hitch

tattooed with metals ink

engraved skin

feels pains true kiss

thunder is envious

for lightnings perfect hit

hits hammer on metal

as the gods crack their whip

Sheer Terror

aka Terry D'Arcy-Ryan

                                                                                  

Author's Note

I must give a special thanks to "Caffeinatedme" for editing and helping me off that ledge what can I say I'm drawn to the spectacular view. Nothing but Love !

Reviews

[RebeccaRose]

Brilliant and witty. I love the aggression behind it all.

[TerryDarcy-Ryan akaSheerTerror]

Scarlet Rose, I was surprised by your comment so you can feel my aggression, anger, resentment and rebellion to go with the flow. wow thank you for
the review.

Sheer Terry

[wordman]

you are creative,i guess this shows how we have become in society,how our morals have gone,guns and all they bring is the new age for todays society

[TerryDarcy-Ryan akaSheerTerror]

Wordman, just having fun putting words together thank you for the review. You rock!!

Sheer Terror