HAMMER on METAL

HAMMER on METAL

A Poem by TerryDarcy-Ryan akaSheerTerror
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" thunder is envious of lightnings perfect hit hammer on metal as the gods crack their whip "

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man kneels in honor

dubbed hammer for the god's of war

creating his place in a hum and rattle

tracks time to a worthy rival

renders a flash in the sky

we fall and fly

lost inside our own battle cry


hammer on metal produces this metallic sound

agony’s pleasure just beyond

again and over the echo responds

calling us home while blinding us profound

a cue recurs

passes over our ears

a crown for a target

the single shot

a blind round


quicker than quick we are enamored

one finger on the trigger

chosen for one

all ages can be a player

the rules have come undone

to beat a new order

the next train

jumps the tracks

a chain snaps back

releases a bullet named terror


this bedlam competes

within the sound of conflict

lives just past bliss's hitch

tattooed with metals ink

engraved skin

feels pains true kiss

thunder is envious
for lightnings perfect hit

hits hammer on metal

as the gods crack their whip



Sheer Terror

aka Terry D'Arcy-Ryan










                                                                                  

© 2019 TerryDarcy-Ryan akaSheerTerror


Author's Note

TerryDarcy-Ryan   akaSheerTerror
I must give a special thanks to "Caffeinatedme" for editing and helping me off that ledge what can I say I'm drawn to the spectacular view. Nothing but Love !

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Wow! beautifully expressed,as darkness hides within it,also conveys love;-]

Posted 7 Years Ago


TerryDarcy-Ryan   akaSheerTerror

7 Years Ago

Weeping Willow thank you for the outstanding review

Sheer Terror
BEAUTIFUL! The intricacy of the thoughts that this poem is trying to convey is so beautifully knitted that I am struck. Loved it!

Posted 7 Years Ago


TerryDarcy-Ryan   akaSheerTerror

7 Years Ago

Ayushi Jha, it makes me happy when anyone gets my writing. Thank you for the Stellar review.
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Photos and words. Outstanding.
"man kneels in grace
he is hammer for the god's of war
creating his place with a hum and rattle
time is man's finest driven enemy
a flash in the sky
we fall and fly lost inside our own battle cry"
You took the reader with you to realistic places and I liked the above lines. The poem hard, direct and true. What poetry support to be. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


TerryDarcy-Ryan   akaSheerTerror

7 Years Ago

Coyote, what a strong and motivating review.
Thank you so much

Sheer Terror
Coyote Poetry

7 Years Ago

You are welcome my friend.
Fantastic piece of writing.
In all the darkness of this, I spotted a singular line of beauty.
"in a place found just past bliss's hitch"
Even though that's a dark line, it's really gorgeous.

Posted 7 Years Ago


TerryDarcy-Ryan   akaSheerTerror

7 Years Ago

I am pleased you found beauty here I thank you for an outstanding review

Sheer Terror
This is pretty advanced writing and covered in imagination and skill.

Great writing. I hope to reach your level someday. :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


TerryDarcy-Ryan   akaSheerTerror

7 Years Ago

Relic, thank you for a stellar review

Sheer Terror
The last verse cracks it home, but the whole thing...

*this bedlam competes with the sound of conflict
in a place found just past bliss's hitch
tattooed with metals ink my engraved skin feels pains true kiss*

... And many others... You fabricate such distinct patterns, and an almost thick feeling of realism...

I do not have the depth of self to confront the issues you do in your writing... The ledge is too deep for me... Strongly penned...

Posted 7 Years Ago


apennylate

7 Years Ago

Enjoy yourself, and be safe... Witches are notorious for the pointy ends... Being cliche is a matter.. read more
TerryDarcy-Ryan   akaSheerTerror

7 Years Ago

Oh, I see .... the one keeping genius separated of a insanity. I do appreciate the words of confide.. read more
apennylate

7 Years Ago

Sporty witch-hunting... Could be a new thing... Hah
The depth of your work continues to astound me, dear. Absolutely brilliant!!! :D

Posted 7 Years Ago


TerryDarcy-Ryan   akaSheerTerror

7 Years Ago

Hey Raven Moonchild , what an amazing review I than you.

Sheer Terror
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The title drew me in and your words kept me chained to it... you explained the chairs of humanity so elegantly yet with a greasy edge. Really dig this one.

Posted 7 Years Ago


TerryDarcy-Ryan   akaSheerTerror

7 Years Ago

BBP, Man can be a creator of incredible acts and beauty and Man has the capacity to be the envy of.. read more
love the way this reads. gem after gem. words conjure potent imagery. there is a sly, sarcastic aggression between the lines. powerful tagline. pics outstanding. all as i've come to expect. this one no exception. outstanding ...

Posted 7 Years Ago


TerryDarcy-Ryan   akaSheerTerror

7 Years Ago

Pete, and here I thought I was subtle ha ha. I wrote this to be subjective letting it be molded by .. read more
. love this nice piece and thanks for sharing.

Posted 7 Years Ago


TerryDarcy-Ryan   akaSheerTerror

7 Years Ago

Roxane, I am glad you like it thank you

Sheer Terror

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When I was a young girl I was your average Tomboy. I lived to watch Star Trek the only thing that could take me away from the voyages of the Star Ship Enterprise was playing Baseball with the boys. .. more..

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