I must give a special thanks to "Caffeinatedme" for editing and helping me off that ledge what can I say I'm drawn to the spectacular view. Nothing but Love !
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BEAUTIFUL! The intricacy of the thoughts that this poem is trying to convey is so beautifully knitted that I am struck. Loved it!
Posted 6 Years Ago
6 Years Ago
Ayushi Jha, it makes me happy when anyone gets my writing. Thank you for the Stellar review. .. read moreAyushi Jha, it makes me happy when anyone gets my writing. Thank you for the Stellar review.
Photos and words. Outstanding.
"man kneels in grace
he is hammer for the god's of war
creating his place with a hum and rattle
time is man's finest driven enemy
a flash in the sky
we fall and fly lost inside our own battle cry"
You took the reader with you to realistic places and I liked the above lines. The poem hard, direct and true. What poetry support to be. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote
Posted 6 Years Ago
6 Years Ago
Coyote, what a strong and motivating review.
Thank you so much
Fantastic piece of writing.
In all the darkness of this, I spotted a singular line of beauty.
"in a place found just past bliss's hitch"
Even though that's a dark line, it's really gorgeous.
Posted 7 Years Ago
7 Years Ago
I am pleased you found beauty here I thank you for an outstanding review
The last verse cracks it home, but the whole thing...
*this bedlam competes with the sound of conflict
in a place found just past bliss's hitch
tattooed with metals ink my engraved skin feels pains true kiss*
... And many others... You fabricate such distinct patterns, and an almost thick feeling of realism...
I do not have the depth of self to confront the issues you do in your writing... The ledge is too deep for me... Strongly penned...
Posted 7 Years Ago
7 Years Ago
Silente, again I am floored by your Superb review.
The ledge comes with a Spectacular view a.. read moreSilente, again I am floored by your Superb review.
The ledge comes with a Spectacular view and a mesmerizing temptation luring you to stay in the wake above mankind, the simplest of desire to no longer claim the human species and a belief you can surely fly. There is a crafty path I have dented deep though my boy (my son Caffeinated.me ) knows how to find me. With that I say thank you for the Superb words of praise they resonate especially profound as I have read your work and you are of a well defined Talent.
Sheer Terror
7 Years Ago
I would love to believe I could fly... My flesh has not the wings for it... I was of the same kin ye.. read moreI would love to believe I could fly... My flesh has not the wings for it... I was of the same kin yesterday... Tons of caffeine, aha... I am glad you found meaning in my words, hopefully half as much meaning as I found in this poem... My pleasure, and happy writing days ahead...!
7 Years Ago
Yes, always happy writing I write for me its like therapy. Damn, that sounds so cliche but it is al.. read moreYes, always happy writing I write for me its like therapy. Damn, that sounds so cliche but it is all about setting something free .... thank you again gotta go working on a witch hunt.
Enjoy yourself, and be safe... Witches are notorious for the pointy ends... Being cliche is a matter.. read moreEnjoy yourself, and be safe... Witches are notorious for the pointy ends... Being cliche is a matter of perspective... If a bad writer says writing is therapy, then it is cliche... However if an excellent writer says it is therapy for them... Then it is not cliche in the slightest. A fine line exists, but it does exist. Hah
7 Years Ago
Oh, I see .... the one keeping genius separated of a insanity. I do appreciate the words of confide.. read moreOh, I see .... the one keeping genius separated of a insanity. I do appreciate the words of confidence and witty banter. No worries about pointy all weapons put away, I'm the one they chase ..just love the sport of it. Haha
7 Years Ago
Sporty witch-hunting... Could be a new thing... Hah
The title drew me in and your words kept me chained to it... you explained the chairs of humanity so elegantly yet with a greasy edge. Really dig this one.
Posted 7 Years Ago
7 Years Ago
BBP, Man can be a creator of incredible acts and beauty and Man has the capacity to be the envy of.. read moreBBP, Man can be a creator of incredible acts and beauty and Man has the capacity to be the envy of evil itself. What is truly in a Man's heart that is what we look to see. I do appreciate the stellar review and I thank you for taking the time.
love the way this reads. gem after gem. words conjure potent imagery. there is a sly, sarcastic aggression between the lines. powerful tagline. pics outstanding. all as i've come to expect. this one no exception. outstanding ...
Posted 7 Years Ago
7 Years Ago
Pete, and here I thought I was subtle ha ha. I wrote this to be subjective letting it be molded by .. read morePete, and here I thought I was subtle ha ha. I wrote this to be subjective letting it be molded by the reader. Your review is outstanding thank you Pete
When I was a young girl I was your average Tomboy. I lived to watch Star Trek the only thing that could take me away from the voyages of the Star Ship Enterprise was playing Baseball with the boys. .. more..