Unconditional Surrender

Unconditional Surrender

A Poem by TerryDarcy-Ryan akaSheerTerror
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" Daydreams of black wings and letters folded in lie, follow your abandon "

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I am a hypocrisy twisting turning from wrong to right

lunacy identifies and claims me while in plain sight

black and white define my movement, I am


Renegade                     

the home I left is shaken, a snow globe scattered soft

one more piece set free in the fragments that remain     

anger crushing calling to jump off the edge, I am


Fury

already deemed a lost cause repeat offender at large

a choir of innocence sings my deception

one last measure for retrospect I confess, I am


Suspect


     my denial is the promise of bliss, a glimpse into oblivion’s empire

                   the fall of the mighty is overkill and gets me nowhere

       survival is the fuel to my star’s fire, brighter than ever, I am


Conviction


                   an unexpected gift, don't you see your betrayal set me free

          daydreams of black wings and letters full of lies, follow your abandon

       the pieces taken for prison are replaced with tenacity     

                                   

       I am, Sheer-Terror   

                                       

                                     



    Terry D’Arcy-Ryan


                                                                                                                     




                                                                                     

© 2018 TerryDarcy-Ryan akaSheerTerror


Author's Note

TerryDarcy-Ryan   akaSheerTerror
* A Special Thanks To CaffeinatedMe for Editing.

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The depth of your work blows me away every time, man. This is absolutely brilliant!!!! :D

Posted 7 Years Ago


TerryDarcy-Ryan   akaSheerTerror

7 Years Ago

WoW, I am blown away by your review. I am thrilled that you enjoyed this thank you for taking the .. read more
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Reads like a piece of self description....

All at once you deem yourself to be an anarchist, a rebel, a whirlwind flying in the face of elitism and the self- righteous. A force to be feared and reckoned with.

A very forceful piece of writing, written and worded in such a way to let the reader truly know who you are and what you stand for.



Posted 7 Years Ago


TerryDarcy-Ryan   akaSheerTerror

7 Years Ago

An introduction to what my journey has been. I write from the past and weave in the emotions that a.. read more
you are showing the reader a view of your inner soul,your convictions,and beliefs,,a world that you are not free

Posted 7 Years Ago


TerryDarcy-Ryan   akaSheerTerror

7 Years Ago

Wordman, you are spot on as usual thank you for the Brave review. You Rock!!
 wordman

7 Years Ago

you`re wecome
nice poem i really like it. thanks for sharing.

Posted 7 Years Ago


TerryDarcy-Ryan   akaSheerTerror

7 Years Ago

Roxanne thank you for taking the time to read and review your reviews are greatly appreciated.
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Very enjoyable read and smooth flow. The world needs more insights from the mind of Sheer-Terror, for history will never know another like you.

Posted 7 Years Ago



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TerryDarcy-Ryan akaSheerTerror

PHOENIX, AZ



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When I was a young girl I was your average Tomboy. I lived to watch Star Trek the only thing that could take me away from the voyages of the Star Ship Enterprise was playing Baseball with the boys. .. more..

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