SUGAR BUZZ

                            

        

you wondered in

with a Cheshire grin

eyes made for sin

I'm all in

ready for the trip

next hit or miss

the spike of lightening's strike

not once but twice

blinded by the flashes

streaks of color found

the long way around

an unexpected place

caught me indeed

swept me off my feet

looked me up and down

face to face

close and secret

our eyes ready to devour

the first layer

caught right there

crashing through the urge to tear

stranger's arm to arm

in the need

the pushing force of a stampede

pull of a stranger's kiss

a punch in the face

force the twisting gears

the sweet candy taste

drops of colors

all of them

even sparkles

odd hints of tinted shade

smashed in whole

shapes of hunger

new an old

lost and found

touching me insane

lacking restraint

jolly ranchers gone extreme

falling the instant

lips collide

a push purely ravenous

a taste of cherry snow

frozen delight

stalking me dizzy

cuz a banana split melts quickly

sugar coma coming into focus

turning from the stranger

that salty shiver of surrender

still in his sights

a tingling of zots

fresh on my lips

the war of sweet and sour

promising kismet

wrapped in a kiss

I need a straight coke

and a shot of pop rocks

this guy is Cherries Garcia

with an angel's touch

cotton candy shades of blue

floating softly in the sky

beyond a dream

just around the corner

over the rainbow

lost on every aisle

gazing deep

into the icee machine

sugar buzz black out

left me 

standing alone

Terry Darcy-Ryan

 dedicated to my little sister, the Ginger Ninja

Nothing but Love

Reviews

[Raven Moonchild]

Dude, you've got me craving candy like mad. lol Brilliant poem and outstanding visionary!!! :D

[TerryDarcy-Ryan akaSheerTerror]

Hey Raven Moon I was just having a little fun with a
buzz. No worry s I will be back to the dark stuff real soon. Thank you for your amazing review

Sheer Terror

[danielle.]

It is so easy to fall for the first layer... Pure lust with nothing to taint it. Enduring the layers beyond is another matter. You poem made me lament this experience.

[DoormanDan]

I definitely adore the candy theme that's prevalent throughout this poem. You did a good job making me visualize something sweet, and overall, the poem now has me wanting to go get some candy XD. Anyway, great work! :)

[ROXANE DORSEY]

I GOT OVER MY SUGAR FIX. DIABETES RUN IN THE DARBY CLAN. DON'T HAVE IT BUT KEEP IN THE KNOW.
LOVE THE POEM.THANKS.

[Brent]

Mmm...candy. I share this uncontrollable urge for sugar as the narrator in your poem. Mine is chocolate, basically any chocolate bar. You describe how this urge provides temporary satisfaction. And the narrator being alone in your poem makes me see that I need to curtail my excessive sugar intake.

Tasty piece of work you got here!

[wordman]

damn,i have that same problem,,great graphics,great write