A CLOSER LOOK

Just a normal looking laid back guy

No caution heard no Hazard signs

i'm just passing by

Our eyes meet

my heart skips a beat

The world around escapes, leaving us this exchange

Two people drawn in close, yet estranged

The magnitude behind that stare

Time has marked a place right here

ls this mutual ? a spark felt passionate

Pulling us like a magnet

The Sheer force, a path for lust

a closer look a hunter’s thirst

More than the everyday juncture

I bargain with seduction, for a promise to deliver

the beauty in those eyes, step into me from afar

Pulling me in closer, close to declare

Real pleasure and pain

I catch the quick Connection, next stop obsession

I will not betray, feeding the momentum

An overwhelming assault to intoxication

A closer look, the impetuous invitation

No words Spoken here, they surrender

The thrill of his body, hot against mine

Skin on skin as bodies intertwine

A thousand nerves rushing to points hidden

all senses keep with the surge that has risen

Again it climbs to a great height

falls away in spite, feeding repetition

tight holds and harder kisses bring sensation

open to melt and mold for pure possession

No more beginnings, no more ends

Desire demands and will not bend

It pushes my pulse and sets us on fire

I am no longer in control the flames aspire

One more time  ……

I want to Scream  … one more time

Keep this moment holding me sublime

Look into my eyes

With a hunger and fire to carry

desire provoking extraordinary

As a call to the wild an animal's prey

gone free with a shooting star’s reentry

Our eyes turn away and no longer see

I’m just passing by

Just a normal looking laid back guy

Terry D'Arcy-Ryan

Author's Note

Which is a dream and which is true? There was a new employee at my office. I didn't think much of him when we first met. He was just that normal looking laid back guy. I was asked to train him in my collection accounts, that is what I do. During the time I was training him he sat at a desk across from me. A few days into the arrangement I was engrossed in my work and I looked up from my monitors for a second, our eyes met. He had been watching me and now we were locked in a stare. It caught me off guard it was intense the exchange of mutual attraction between us. I liked it and it was something I wanted to feel again. This normal looking laid back guy was more than I had labeled him. After the moment passed I had him switched to a different associate for his training. I wrote this Poem once I got my office back. So, this Poem is very real and very much my daydream gone extreme. If your still reading thank you and God Bless.

Reviews

[Lovecraft]

Oh, Sons of Anarchy, huh?

A beautiful poem about a "mutual attraction" that just may never occur so you wonder what it might be like if you actually pursued him and what would happen between the two of you.

I've had moments like this where I've met eyes with an attractive woman I don't know and you daydream about the possibilities inherent in that moment but for any number of reasons you choose to do nothing about it.

It's a great "What If" poem regarding Love and Attraction. Nice job! It really made me think of a specific time when I was in a situation like this with a woman but I never tried to do anything about it.

Very powerful and effective poem, Sheer! :)

[Michael S]

This is awesome, Sheer Kindness.As I know you write mostly based on real experiences..this kinda had that feel in it. It was thrilling to read. Day dreams do come true, I heard once ;-)
I really enjoyed reading this one. Now, your writings are having that warmth. Great transformation from a terror and anger genre to humble/attraction/love genre. A very cute and innocent write :-)
Author's note was also interesting to read.
Great going.

[JessyJacob]

why that old lady teacher is getting bored to talk even.....
i just remembered my dream, once upon a time i had a dream with a 8th class boy with 17 years college girl, he is on phone with vgames, and poor teacher writing his homeowrk.

A cute one, now i feel why he is not talking, didnt get bored of v-games,

[Pete]

Looks like someone has a case of 'the hots'. 'Ahem ...' Is the 'Closer Look' at him or the accounts?!

[TerryDarcy-Ryan akaSheerTerror]

Pete, this is much bigger than that. Yes its about my coworker it s a day dream i put into poetry form. Thank you for taking the time God Bless.

Sheer Terror

[Pete]

i know Sheer. just kidding. nice job. :)

[JessyJacob]

Day dream, or its forecevr days dream? Sheer, should it be the later.

[wordman]

two souls passing through the night,seeking solace

[TerryDarcy-Ryan akaSheerTerror]

Thanks wordman I appreciate it when you take the time to read my stuff. You rock.

Sheer Terror