In Autumn

A chain of Haikus about everyone's worst and favourite season.

 

Leaves are delicate,

Playful, chasing each other,

Tarnished butterflies.

 

Rain falls harsh and clear.

As the sky cries out for love,

We wish it hatred.

 

Air is icy, numb,

Makes it hard for us to breathe

And harder to feel.

 

Water’s freezing cold.

Frosted with harsher versions

Of itself, with ice.

 

Nature stops in time.

Fingers twisted to cold Sun,

Plants plead for mercy.

Reviews

[Eagle Cruagh]

Inventive and most attractive.
In addition to being a very inventive
writing, it sums up autumn in realistic manner.
Somehow, the cold fingers and the icy winds
do nothing for my disposition, but they sure sound
familiar.
Altogether, an attractive, talented piece of writing.
My favorite !
---- Eagle Cruagh

[Alex Annesty]

This is great. "Tarnished butterflies" is a heart-stoppingly brilliant image; an experienced poet, twice your age, would be proud of it. Never give up writing.

[Save the Trees, Save th..]

awesome totally awesome

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Nature stops in time.
Fingers twisted to cold Sun,
Plants plead for mercy

THESE LINES REALLY STICK OUT THERE, THIS IS A WONDERFUL WRITE HERE, I LIKE THIS.....AMANDA