Seeking

Just a quick tiny poem, born of much confused energy.

Focus eluding
Doubt exuded

Something lost
Somewhere forgotten

Pointless sleep
Shaking quiet

Reviews

[Pickleby Davies]

I love this! I get the message and yet it's short so not one word doesnt belong

[therisa]

Brief but expressive, at the same time, conveying your message. Great job.

[Liz Alexander]

Your amazing at this.

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wonderful write~not one word wasted~Expressive!

james

[paul]

more great stuff

[Robin]

I like it , it has that classic short form feel and flow , message conveyed