Say my name

Say it.

My eyes are gonna stare holes

through my masterpice

I'm in front of,

if I won't find you soon.

The lines of your face,

painted roughly, blurry,

have burned into my pupils,

and your scent is all over

that lucky canvas.

Oxygen seems boring in comparsion.

And I know my touch lingers over your skin

and you can't bear it any longer,

but please, be patient.

I will let you turn my world upside down,

if you appear in mine.

My eyes are closed

and I'm ready to hear you.

Say my name.

Author's Note

So, what do you think? Let me know.
The masterpiece I'm staring at is a reference to my other work, might want to check it out.

Reviews

[Chris]

Intendedly intense... and toasty

[sheandherself]

Yaad thanks.)

[😂]

*says your name* ;)

[sheandherself]

yaaa that's nice

[😂]

hehehehehe!!

[unspokenpain]

Good work, really like wording. One boo boo Is you put "is" instead of "in" where it states "oxygen is boring IN comparison." all around though a decent job.

[sheandherself]

Oh thank you so much, well mistakes happen lol. Xx

[unspokenpain]

that they do ^.^

[PoeticSorcery]

real live people can sometimes bring far more passion into our minds and hearts than any celebrity could ever hope to. probably why I fall in love with girls shopping in stores more often than some girl singing a song in a music video lol

[sheandherself]

Yeah, absolutely right.

[PoeticSorcery]

glad I was able to make sense there lol

[😂]

We are the celebrities ! :D

[PoeticSorcery]

hope the paparazzi doesn't find out then, I hate them lol

[😂]

Yes, the "paparazzi" , aka. "anyone curious about you", have been after me for a while, "actually not at all." Because I took the precaution of scaring them all the fk away with my madness. But that didn't stop Charlie from getting them after him. Soo........idk . I think my goal now is to just try and clean up the madness. Y kno? Yea, I know none of this is relevant and im a babbling nutcase. Darn!

[PoeticSorcery]

being an oddball isn't so bad. granted I don't really understand any of that, but that's what makes people like you interesting or fun. it's just a matter of finding the right kind of people to surround yourself with. and the only way of doing that is experimenting and forcing a reaction out of them with such talk. so keep at it, one day, you may find someone worth your time. or maybe I'm not making any sense now, it's so hard to tell sometimes, especially due to my lack of sleep lol

[😂]

nope, perfect sense was made. THanks for the tips !

[PoeticSorcery]

I do my best, I'm like doctor phil but without the degree, the arrogance, or the weight lol