And So It Is.

And So It Is.

A Story by She_Saw_Stars

I am waiting. It is raining.

My bag weighs heavy on my shoulder as I wait for him. I lean back on the wall to ease some pressure and wish that it wasn't raining -even though I am currently standing under shelter (Fine hair and rain is not a very good look!).

I listen to the gentle noise the rain makes on top of the shelter and it helps my mind drift away. I re-live moments of the weekend just gone and wish I could jump into my memory and stay there. Even the moment of despair we both felt -we experienced it together, it was more bearable that way.

I re-live moments that felt right, that felt good. Moments that I hope can be made again.

I come out of my daze and see him arrive. I smile and walk out into the rain towards him, forgetting how heavy my bag is. I notice the rain drops in his hair.

He is beautiful.

© 2008 She_Saw_Stars


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Thank you for your reviews! They're very much appreciated. :-)

Posted 16 Years Ago


I agree with CarinaCullen. It was very well written, and visual. I think that it's wonderful.

Keep on writing!!!!!

Posted 16 Years Ago


I loved it. It was very powerful, and you could visualize it very well in your head. Well written too. Good Job!

Posted 16 Years Ago


So is your story. Well thought out and put together.

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on September 8, 2008

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