Sunrise ( Acrostic/Slant )

Sunrise shall bring to us all its promises

Unveiling ultraviolet rays, as clear to you

Night skies now slipping away and then

Right in view robins sing to us in a choir

In these moments I listen closely, as I

Savor all their soft songs in my dreams

Enjoying the moment each felt with love

Reviews

[Poetic-Theorem]

Wow, what a brilliantly crafted Acrostic, I don't ever recal reading an acrostic formed with a slant like this. I've read some that shadowed but not one that slants the acrostic inside as well. As always, I love how your acrostics flow too, here I would keep your highlights, it's needed, but if you removed them the acrotic, beginning, middle to end would not stand out per se, it's woven in wonderfully and think this is marvelous penning for an acrostic. Excellent work as always, Sis. *hug* David

[Mark]

This is pretty unique! Not only "acrosticized" at beginning AND end, but through he middle as well! And not the least bit forced-sounding, for all that! I 'm not sure I've ever seen one quite like it. My only stab at an acrostic was accidental, as I did not know what the form meant at the time. You might want to check out "Catalogged", if you get the chance.

[J Todd Underhill]

Rocking the acrostic again I see, Never letting me down with your work. Bravo once more, I miss being in contact on a regular basis.

[John Faulkner]

Beautiful acrostic, Deb..You never fail to provide us with a true blessing of loving words.So sweet and tender this piece is


JOHN