Dreams We Dare To Ponder (Sonnet)

In conjured up dreams we dare to ponder,

About this love we share within our soul.

Your hand gripped in mine in our wonder,

And autumn leaves are tumbling in a roll.

 

About this love we share within our soul,

Transparent in sight herein memoirs told.

Affairs of the heart in each verse console,

As our precious time spent never be sold.

 

Transparent in sight herein memoirs told,

Inscribed in diaries from years long before.

Of a lifetime passed before eyes retold,

And of love which remains in fond adore.

 

While autumn leaves are tumbling in a roll,

Affairs of the heart in each verse console.

Reviews

[Beth Winter]

Bravo sis

[Titus]

Hi Debbie, Hope you wasn't offended by my not wanting comments. I find less sincerity goes on making big of my crap, but that is as a whole, not you or Josie, or Nat or Kinza. You four mean all th world to me.

[SheWolfNLust]

You mean the world to us four Tony, as well.. I was afraid that my commenting might of upset you some, and that was never my intentions, it took me by sock what you wrote, I was afraid of writing how I feel about your poems and that I might hurt you by writing what's sincere in my heart about your poetry, it would of felt so odd writing a simplier comment like hope your doing well or something really simple, cause i go on my first reactions on how I feel about a poem and how I am impressed by it,

[SheWolfNLust]

it took me by shock that is, my typo's are really bad today, hey but that's me

[AJ Morelli]

I have played with sonnets over the years with varying degrees of success, love is a wonderful subject for the form and you have really nice job with this one, it is truly lovely.

[SheWolfNLust]

awe thanks ever so kindly for your beautiful words of encouragement, they mean so much and are very much appreciated xoxo

[Emily Feret]

I love reading about love! Thank you for sharing!

[Trigorin]

Not bad. I hardly read any sonnets any more so this was a nice change of pace for me. You have a good concept and you've executed it well within the constraints of the form. Good work.

[SheWolfNLust]

awe thanks so much for your comment and your amazing words of encouragement, this poem has always been a favorite of mine, I am so thrilled that you enjoyed it, smiles