Cuddle Me Soft

Cuddle me soft while we lay side by side

Thus feeling fires inner growing in us

While I lay close your heart I listen to

Our soft beats do thump in sync together

Cuddled me soft…

 

Baby it’s those precious moments I love

The most on these blustering winter nights

It’s you who ignites the fire in my heart.

 

Our passion plays softy in our heartbeats

That race so fast in our love making

It’s the softness of you kiss I love most

While we lay side by side cuddle me soft.

Cuddle me soft…

Reviews

[Trigorin]

Rather generic love poem. You have an interesting way of putting things, I suppose, but I'm not sure the lyrical quality you're going for here really suits the poem, and some of your word choice is disappointingly simple. I'd suggest thinking about what sort of message you want to send with this piece and considering whether you've sent it or not.