The Storm Within

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I am like a thunderstorm, Hateful and Unstable I am like a thunderstorm, Destructive, Dark, Depressing I am a Thunderstorm... My tears fall like the rain, beating down hard, Unpredictable, burning through my skin, praying for the end I am a Thunderstorm... My screams are my thunder, loud and explosive, echoing through the dark sky, falling soundless on your ears I'm ignored, you pretend you don't hear me, you turn the other way, but my screams are never ending I am a Thunderstorm... I am the wind, Rushing wildly, running freely, trying to escape all my problems, but the only catch up with me, Haunting. I am a Thunderstorm... My heart is like the storm clouds, Darkened with greif, Secluded and Locked away, Trying to block out the pain and hide the scars I am a Thunderstorm... I am Lightning, Anger flashing, Spreading like Wildfire, Then fading fast, leaving behind a path of destruction, I am a Thunderstorm... I am like a thunderstorm, Unreasonable, Undefiable, I am like a thunderstorm, Menacing, a Tragedy, Nature's greatest mistake, I am a Thunderstorm.

Reviews

[Antonio Valentino]

I love thunderstorms. What a great poem you wrote using this awesome part of nature to describe such emotion and passion.

Wonderful write!
I hope your circumstances allow you to write about more pleasant weather soon!
Antonio

[ICE]

I like how you not only portray yourself as a thunderstorm, but how you also personify the tunderstorm. It makes the reader feel and experience everything you feel. A wonderful piece of work!!!

~Ice