But of Glass and Crystal

But of Glass and Crystal

A Poem by SheActsLikeSummer
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Th rose to my chest, a fragrant, renewed sent...

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The rose to my chest,
A fragrant, renewed scent,
One of which I’m obsessed

Its vibrant, clear petals,
Dashing in the moonlight,
Beautiful crystals

Despite everything it stands for,
What it means to the human race,
I relish its splendour

This rose; not crafted by,
Our worlds mother nature,
But a genetic engineering high

No more is anything natural,
No more can you find flowers,
Trees, brushes, nothing agricultural

It’s a fake world we live in,
A glass world, kept contained,
Like bugs trapped in a jar,
No breath to be taken,
No holes in the lid

Suffocating
Choking
Smothered

Feeling like the ant trapped,
Beneath your magnifying glass

Scorched
Scalded
Seared

Not from the sun,
Not from the light,
That shines upon

But from the sudden realization,
That this world is no longer,
The planet of earth and sea

© 2012 SheActsLikeSummer


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SheActsLikeSummer
Hope you liked it... please review! :P

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It's wonderful, not that I have the experience or authority to fo around telling people this but, I think you have an amazing talent :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


I enjoyed the three worded stanzas. Added a nice touch to the poem..I got nothing to add expect, "VERY WELL DONE"

Posted 12 Years Ago


I loved it! It think this speaks very well of our false sense of conserving our environment by creating a constructed atmosphere around it. It makes me think of a greenhouse and we are the plants. I very much enjoyed it.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Great write. Wonderfully painted images.

Posted 12 Years Ago


i love it. especially the last stanza. It has a sad sort of acceptance to it. It's calm while still being awaking. Really beautiful :)

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on April 12, 2012
Last Updated on April 12, 2012
Tags: rose, planet, glass, crystal, earth, sea, petal, clear

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SheActsLikeSummer
SheActsLikeSummer

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