Secret Desire

 

Have you ever counted the hours

And felt the breeze as time passes

Glittered faces

Chasing angels

As I stood under the sky

It was you I wanted by my side

The grass beneath my feet

Afraid to plunge into the deep?

Break free, run wild

Take a walk with me

Just once this time

Stop living in a lie

Just once

Before we die

Reviews

[LilyGrace]

A nice call for honesty and risk-taking, if I've read that correctly!
Good write
LGD

[Frank F. Atanacio]

nice flow of questioning words...