Dead End

Dead End

A Poem by Infinite hexes

Drearily, I stare up

Empyrean never felt so sombre

Eternal rest tempting

Feels like my answer

 

Anticipating red

Rotting down

I think I'm already dead

What’s left of me can never be found

 

I am tired already

Emptiness getting to me

But if it was this easy

I would be bad luck free

 

I’m

     F

         a

              d

                  i

                      n

                          g

 

© 2013 Infinite hexes


Author's Note

Infinite hexes
This doesn't have anything to do with my personal life, just felt like writing it

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I don't believe everyone can relate to this feeling. Those of us who do and have felt ourselves "fading" at times understand the helplessness you penned. There is not even enough energy for desperation anymore...
Simply and inevitably drifting off like an astronaut untethered to the space ship.
There is hope. It does not even come from within, but is rather gifted to our spirit by the Spirit of Life in the universe. Some will say God, or higher power, or supernatural. Still, the point here is we are not drifting alone in the vastness if space. We are a collection of brilliant stars filling the universe with light. As long as the is a breath and something left to fade, there is hope.
A great capture of the lows or rock bottoms we can experience in this life.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Infinite hexes

9 Years Ago

'There is not even enough energy for desperation anymore' . Yes, I guess that's true for some of US... read more
Despairing of despair and getting no where with the pairing. The hole opened up in my soul reading this, knowing to have felt that I wanted to feel this once long ago. What faded was the the despair and the reliance upon luck. It is a good poem to have everyone's eyes on a less than somber heaven, while try to avoid the void in the middle of the soul.
Not sure how you got the fade to fade, but good touch, reminds me of "Falling Up" by Silverstein (just the play with word and letter movement).

Posted 10 Years Ago


Infinite hexes

10 Years Ago

Thank you RavenDelcor. Your view in this is very much appreciated. I am touched that you could find .. read more
RavenDelcor

10 Years Ago

It was a constant for a few years. I saw myself as tight-rope walking across a vast swirling abyss. .. read more
Ah I see you're toying around with words too...Great work here. You're so good at writing, I wish I'd see it more frequently. And my mistake, I actually thought you were talking about yourself.
"But if it was this easy
I would be bad luck free"
Those two lines are stuck in my mind now. Powerful poem as usual :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Infinite hexes

11 Years Ago

Thank you. This is the first time I'm toying with words.
A very good poem. Sometime it feels like we have no reason and purpose.
"I am tired already
Emptiness getting to me
But if it was this easy
I would be bad luck free"
I like the above lines a lot. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


Infinite hexes

11 Years Ago

Thank you for reading :D
I think this captures that helpless feeling of being stuck... being in a situation that seems hopeless and beyond redemption. I've been there, felt that. Nice work.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Infinite hexes

11 Years Ago

Thank you for reading, I've been waiting for your review, because this type of poems seems like your.. read more
Mark

11 Years Ago

Oh... I suppose it is. I try not to look like a victim.
Infinite hexes

11 Years Ago

You are doing a great job

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Added on August 5, 2013
Last Updated on August 19, 2013
Tags: emo, sadness, dying, not starting over, tired


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