The green-eyed monster

                                                            You suck                                     You really do

                            All these years

                You've been doing nothing

                         But ruining my life

        Those stupid rumors and lies

        Hide behind your brown eyes

           But there’s a question I must ask

                        Why?

 

                     Sometimes I do wonder

                      What was your reason

                          Sometimes I don’t

                    Who'd waste their time

                  Thinking of a loser like you

      Accusing my winsome anatomy

         Jealousy - that can be creepy

              How could I have been so blind

                                  To your dark green side 

                               

                 Yes, behind those brown eyes

                      Lies an acid green

                           You are

               The green-eyed monster my friend

                 Always hiding under my bed

                   So come and swallow me

                  Innocent brain- a good feed

                     Eat my grace and artistry

                     My green-eyed monster

Author's Note

This poem is about a jealous friend that I passionately hate :P

Reviews

[Becca Bishop]

Wonderful!!! I love how the first words kind've catch you and draw you in...when I read them I was all like "yeah, I know I suck" I was a little sad that you figured it out so soon.... But I kept reading :D and it turns out you didn't know that I suck!!! But I guess since I just told you now you know....anyways.....way off topic here.
I like this one :D :D Especially how you're not really naming what the monster did to you, just...yeah....

[Infinite hexes]

Lol.

[CagedEnigma]

This............I don't think I even need to say how awesome I think this one is. :p

[Infinite hexes]

Aww thats sweet! Thanks :D

[PurpleQuartz]

A unique write that captivated me from the first few words! Great write!!

[Infinite hexes]

Thank you

[Leslie Philibert]

great, a young person`s poem full of rage, funny and angry at the same time, great layout ( something even famous poets like Herta Müller do ), so fine job here

[Infinite hexes]

Thank you for this wonderful review

[Death Heather]

I like this. It is something that i can relate to having a monster ruining your life. I like reading this so much so that I had to read it again. Great write.

[Infinite hexes]

Haha yes it is pretty annoying. Thanks for the review :)

[Debbie_Philly]

WOW..... this piece is full of fire .... love it !!

[Blue Ivory]

WOAH. Not sure who this is about. But it's amazing, and I wouldn't even mind if this was about me. Going to my favorites. Best I've read in a while. You're a genius. Don't give up on your passion. Don't shut the door to this world.

[Infinite hexes]

I wrote this like in general- about everyone. And lol you and your attempts at inspiration(not that I don't like it)

[Muse]

I envy you....you are young and talented. Don't let another person's green bring you down. xo