God made me and you

Umm….

Hi there,

I love you

But I’m too shy to tell you

 

So I thought of an old trick
Red roses are sick

But just as I was about to pick one

A thought hit me-

God created flowers, not me

 

Then this got me thinking

How can I create something?

Something that is completely mine

My idea of love

 

There is nothing God didn’t make

From fabrics, food and sake

To emotion and words

And animals count too

Humans- that’s me and you

 

That thought made my day

Because I finally realized

That perfect present

That’s only mine to give

 

It’s love

Made by God

For me to give you

So here’s a kiss-

From heaven

Reviews

[David Scott]

Thank you for the gentle kiss of a loving heart. You sent a loving thought to me today. I usually like my poetry to rhym, but there are a few poets who can pull off the art of word play enough to get the read to flow well. You did a good job as far as I'm concerned. :-)
Be well.

[Chanchal Sheik]

I am not much of a poetry reader but this is Good. Keep Writing & Keep Sharing :)

[Blue Ivory]

Omg! This is incredible! Get some other font. And add a picture. You should feature this poem. I love it! Get something with cursive in it.

[Infinite hexes]

Well siren, I had a hard time choosing a font,so yeah
and how do you add pictures in a poem,i never got that :P

[Blue Ivory]

I can't see the comment for some reason. Except for in my home page, so I'll reply to as much of it I saw: click on "add image" at the top of your writing box.

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the beautiful and positive logic of this poem. I like the flow of thoughts and the amazing ending.
"It’s love
Made by God
For me to give you
So here’s a kiss-
From heaven"
Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote