God made me and you

Umm….

Hi there,

I love you

But I’m too shy to tell you

 

So I thought of an old trick
Red roses are sick

But just as I was about to pick one

A thought hit me-

God created flowers, not me

 

Then this got me thinking

How can I create something?

Something that is completely mine

My idea of love

 

There is nothing God didn’t make

From fabrics, food and sake

To emotion and words

And animals count too

Humans- that’s me and you

 

That thought made my day

Because I finally realized

That perfect present

That’s only mine to give

 

It’s love

Made by God

For me to give you

So here’s a kiss-

From heaven

Reviews

[David Scott]

Thank you for the gentle kiss of a loving heart. You sent a loving thought to me today. I usually like my poetry to rhym, but there are a few poets who can pull off the art of word play enough to get the read to flow well. You did a good job as far as I'm concerned. :-)
Be well.

[Wórdsmíth]

well, ,now i'm worryin' what i gotta say to you this time, you just got me. liked indeed your workin' way...moreover i'm lovin' your writin' style, each poem...each your writin' contained powerful words along with different different fonts...& as i saw that...
It’s love
Made by God
For me to give you
So here’s a kiss-
From heaven.....these few appropriate lines are jjust suited on your beautiful tittle "GOD MADE ME N YOU"...n well, moreover it's too suited with your name too "HEAVEN"...lol
very pretty thinkin', liked your thoughts that generated from your good mind...
well written

[Infinite hexes]

Haha aww you are soo sweet :) Thank you for pointing those out you are a really nice reviewer :)

[Zap-the-awesome]

I loved that!! I don't think there's many people that share the view that, in truth, God made everything, even some who claim to believe so it was refreshing for me to read this. Excellent work and thought put into it!!

[Infinite hexes]

thank you :)

[written in blood]

lalalala the angels are singing!! beautiful!!! thanks!!
after a poem I just read!! God knew I needed peace .. so lovely

[Infinite hexes]

good to know that, and thanks for the review, and btw nice username :P

[written in blood]

you are welcome and thank you!

[Death Heather]

I really like this. It is a good read and God did create the world so if he didn't love us we wouldn't be here. I have been told that God will always be there no matter what.

[Pax]

how sweet and adorable...
enjoyable read indeed!!!

[Horizon K.]

Very sweet... So did the shy one give the kiss after all? Very enjoyable piece:)

[Paul McCall]

Interesting itinerary and nicely presented. I liked it very much.

[Fabian G. Franklin]

And a heavenly poem as well. I enjoyed. And...I needed that kiss. ;o)

[Akshat♥]

very well written piece..
full of emotions with wisdom:)
God is always there with us in every bit of it..
Keep writing!! :)

[fiery-san]

This is so cute and innocent. It's nicely written and portrays the image of love in its most innocent form. Well done, also, I like the font choice it's very fitting for the piece. ^_^