For I am Complete

 Staring you in the eyes

 My knees suddenly go weak

 "Please, Just don't leave me"

 Is all that escapes my lips

 I drop to the floor

 My vision goes to a blur

 Screams fill the room

 Your hand holding mine

 as if saying "I Promise"

 My soul leaves my body

 Your heart torn apart

 Tears streaming down your eyes

 I'm sorry it had to end this way

 Though we will meet again

 I take one more look

 At the soul i have just killed

 Do i go?

 Do I stay?

 More bloody screams

 My focus snaps

 Only to see you by my side

 I smile

 He has killed you

 as he did to me

 Are hands together

 As we walk off

 I have my other half

 For now I am complete

Author's Note

I honestly didn't know what this was about when i first started writing this and i still don't know does anyone have any ideas it just came to my head and i took the pen and scribbled it down before it left my mind.... so does anyone know because i don't

Reviews

[WatashLegend]

this could be taken a couple of different ways the first way I interpreted it was a murder-suicide , this write has a nice flow to it and it is well penned.

[PyroKitty24]

Very pretty~ you did a good job writing this, but I just want to point out in the fourth to last line you used 'are' instead of 'our'. Besides that it was a fun read and very beautifully written!

[Leave me alone....]

it sounds like two friends who are murdered by ones father. That or two lovers who are murdered but are glad to be together. Loved the poem, gets me thinking.

[Silent Knight]

Interesting. Hard to follow, but I really like it. Sounds like a murder. Whatever that was, it was good.

[Shadow Spirit]

I think it's about a murderer.... And ghosts? I guess that the individual you were writing about was waiting for his/her friend to die so they could both be dead together. Anyways, it was very "out of the blue" and I loved it very much. Thank you for sharing this piece with other readers and I

[Dr.Who.LOVER]

Aww soo sweet