Replaced

Overcoming this obstacle

That just so happens to be you

I know I'm loosing you

your replacing us

with the girl I hate the most

I knew this would happen

I miss you

oh so dearly

I hate everything about 

what you became

but i still love you

one of kind

hard to find

please don't leave me

yet you already have

I can't find you anymore

Not one trace 

of who you use to be

only who she is

Why does it kill me inside?

Because I know 

all the memories are burned

and useless to you now

Why am I depressed now?

Because you made me so happy

you meant everything to me

and you knew

yet you still managed to 

backstab and

Replace me

Reviews

[whosaysyournotperfect1]

i like it good work

[☯]

I don't think all your poems sound the same, but maybe you should open up to this concept more, and widen the perspectives. I really liked this poem, and the hurt and depression really spoke through. It flowed nicely, and I enjoyed reading this a lot :)

[WynterPhoenix]

I agree. They don't sound the same. You did an excellent job with expressing these emotions. Great write.

[Tasha]

no they don't all sound the same. this was really good. its also sad to get replaced, but most of the time being replaced is a good thing for both of you. i loved this, you did a really outstanding job.