Surfer

Love the beach :)

In the early morning on the beach

 

Hearing the wave crush against the rocks 

 

Feeling the nice soft warm sand in between your toes

 

Beginning to wax your board, all the peacefulness around you

 

No one but you and the wide open blue sea

 

Jumping in to the water felling the current take you in

 

Paddling out to sea wait for the right wave

 

The sun breaks open on the horizon

 

No one but you and the wide open blue sea

 

The light beginning to relfect the vast color of the ocean

 

You feel chills down your spine knowing that

 

You are gonna catch the first wave of the day

 

Looking behide you and see the wave begin to form

 

You paddle out and hop on your board

 

The wave begins to lift you high in the sky

 

You feel the electricty in you body turn into adrenaline

 

No one but you and the wide open blue sea  

 

The rest of the waves takes you out to shore and

 

You know that your day is set and you know nothing will ruin it

 

You are a Surfer

 

 

 

Author's Note

Tell me how i did or can get better :)

Reviews

[Trigorin]

I think you lost an 'r' somewhere.
As for the content, you managed to express yourself fairly well, but I feel as though you might have been able to expand this piece a little more had you wanted to - as it stands it's a little one-dimensional, and I think that there's potential here for something more.

[ShaunaBieber143]

Thanks for the advice :)