Mother May I

I have intended this for people of this site to read.

   Mother may I remind you to what kindness is?

   It is the way you say hello and address the young woman as a Miss.

  When I compliment you, you must feel obligated to return the favor,

  Not make it to where I must search in desperation or in long labor,

  So When I produce a writing, in which I want one simple review,

  I must go out on a mission to paddle upstream in a split canoe.

 I have since been handing out critiques of other's work left and right

 but only left with the feeling that I am only clinging onto a losing fight.

  Now you all know how lonely or how bad I feel,

 When I am not heard through the only way I can appeal

 To all of those people not listening to my cry

but it will not matter for they will not read my question asking why.

Author's Note

no-one will read this anyway :|

Reviews

[cest la vie]

Oh yes someone did read this. I did and I hear your plea. YOu are an incredible person and I love the way you write. Lets change that negative to a positive like your talent. OKay? Pleas esend me your writes and I will read every one and others will as well..
Lynne