Forever Hurt

Forever hurt,

My mind goes blank,

Replaced with tears in my eyes,

Thinking about it only makes it worse,

This illness,

With no cure,

Sometimes I feel like I'm dying,

While other times I'm fine,

My heart is constantly breaking,

Without actually completely healing,

Sometimes I get this feeling,

That no one's there anymore,

It hurts, it burns, it's breaking me down,

There is nothing I can do to help it,

My soul has left my body long ago,

Leaving a lifeless heart,

Even without the ability to love,

This feeling still haunts me,

In my sleep, 

It's always there,

In the most unexpected places,

I will never lose it's shadow,

Forever hurt.

Reviews

[Ryan Cecere]

AWESOME :D

[Sharon]

Thanks!

[.]

I felt pain and sadness, a sign that ur a wonderful writer, especially in poems! 100/100 Keep up! ^.^

[Sharon]

Thank you. I'm glad you like it.

[.]

No prob! ^.^

[Sharon]

:)

[Rhianne Ney]

Time brings happiness, my fellow. It will come soon after the pain and the hurt that captures you. Great poem by the way~!

[Sharon]

Thank you. Glad you enjoyed it.:)

[Rhianne Ney]

You're welcome

[Jonah V. Syx]

Tis a sweet sadness and pain that mes you feel happy somehow.

[Sharon]

Yup. This feeling. Can be described in so many possible ways.

[Dark Rider]

Beautiful, just beautiful! Wonderful job, Sharihe! :)

[Sharon]

Thank you very much. I'm glad you liked it!

[Dark Rider]

I loved it!

[Sharon]

Thanks

[Dark Rider]

You're welcome!

[Sharon]

^-^