TMBGITW

I get riled up
passion burning bright
you douse me with water
keep my head right

I tend to get paranoid
jump to conclusions
you whisper kind words
shatter delusions

I fall and break
seemingly lost forever
you sweep me up
glue me back together

This is for my love
forever none the wiser
with all my heart
from me
your secret admirer

Reviews

[Richelleau]

Nicely penned and thought provoking
I think everyone can get a good feel for this poem,

"you sweep me up
glue me back together"

truly exceptional piece bud

[J.Black]

Oh nice write you got here. Such a really well said poem. "I tend to get paranoid, jump to conclusions" -- I'm guilty of that myself.

[Bella]

I love this. It's such a great poem. I especially love the part about falling and being glued back together. Great, great writing!

[Frank F. Atanacio]

charming...