sun kissed visions
A Poem by
Jesse N. Wall
While breathing bits of sentences in and out and all night long... You killed my slumber dead you slapped me with your sweet haiku. from clouds of color sun kissed visions fell through sky to be swallowed hot ----------© jnw
© 2011 Jesse N. Wall
Reviews
mmmm. Need to think about his one.
ATB
Alex.
Posted 12 Years Ago
heavy feeling pukes visual and visual sucks feeling to heavy
Posted 13 Years Ago
heavy feeling pukes visual and visual sucks feeling to heavy
I can't tell you how many sleepless nights, over the years, that I was drawn to pen and paper like an addiction. I liked this write very much!
Posted 13 Years Ago
I can't tell you how many sleepless nights, over the years, that I was drawn to pen and paper like an addiction. I liked this write very much!
Very intimate, poetically analytical and raw. I love it.
Posted 13 Years Ago
Very intimate, poetically analytical and raw. I love it.
Wow. Something new, unique and equally good. Well written! :)
Posted 13 Years Ago
Wow. Something new, unique and equally good. Well written! :)
You have given life to words. I like the odd format you used here, refreshing.
Posted 13 Years Ago
You have given life to words. I like the odd format you used here, refreshing.
I think what really drew me into this poem was the title, but now I'm in love with the format, especially how the lines were almost choppy. That's what made them great though. short but sweet, i loved it :) It read like a dream
xoxo Caitlyn xoxo
Posted 13 Years Ago
I think what really drew me into this poem was the title, but now I'm in love with the format, especially how the lines were almost choppy. That's what made them great though. short but sweet, i loved it :) It read like a dream
xoxo Caitlyn xoxo
breathing bits of sentences - nice, although I tend to blead bits of sentences, but that's just semantics! ;) I liked it
Posted 13 Years Ago
breathing bits of sentences - nice, although I tend to blead bits of sentences, but that's just semantics! ;) I liked it
this is fresh and brilliant. nice original phrasing which adds substance and color to your work. well done.
Posted 13 Years Ago
this is fresh and brilliant. nice original phrasing which adds substance and color to your work. well done.
This is good, different,
I like the diversity of it,
And yet it doesn't run wild like weeds.
This is nice,
Vanna Renee
Posted 13 Years Ago
This is good, different,
I like the diversity of it,
And yet it doesn't run wild like weeds.
This is nice,
Vanna Renee
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Added on March 13, 2011
Last Updated on March 13, 2011
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Jesse N. Wall Los Angeles, CA
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